Hi Sophie I like your writing it makes me get the picture of the rugby ball being in the other teams hands. It makes me feel like I'm the ball. Its makes me think about you flying then going for the try.
vHi Sophie I like your writing it makes me get the picture of the rugby ball being in the other teams hands. It makes me feel like I'm the ball. Its makes me think about you flying then going for the try.
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Hi Sophie I like your writing it makes me get the picture of the rugby ball being in the other teams hands. It makes me feel like I'm the ball. Its makes me think about you flying then going for the try.
ReplyDeletevHi Sophie I like your writing it makes me get the picture of the rugby ball being in the other teams hands. It makes me feel like I'm the ball. Its makes me think about you flying then going for the try.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie. It was funny when you said you don't like getting kicked around like a ball. Maybe you could put a picture of yourself with a rugby ball.
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